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General Advice
- “The only way to learn to write is to force yourself to produce a certain number of words on a regular basis.” – William Zinsser
- Most underestimated skill: how to organize a long article
- Rewriting
- Each paragraph should reinforce the previous one.
- Now, what do your readers want to know next? Ask yourself that question after every sentence.
- Use paragraphs of five sentences or fewer
- Use verbs that embed the meaning of their adverbs. (“She spoke loudly” → “She shouted")
- Use adjectives and adverbs if they're important details.
- Take 1-week breaks to defamiliarize yourself
- Ask readers to score your writing from 1 to 10. Aim for 7.5+.
- Finish
- Give as much thought to choosing your last sentence as you did to your first
- Read everything aloud before letting it go out into the world
Concepts
The call and response pattern
There's a style of writing - let's call it call-and-response. It works like this: if you find you could at least somewhat naturally italicize the last part of the clause, then your writing will feel crisp and clean. Every phrase leads to something; every sentence sets you up for resolution.
Why does this work? I can think of three reasons.
First, it gives your writing a lyrical lilt. Songs do call-and-response all the time.
Second, it highlights parallelism. If you want your reader to see a comparison between adjacent sentences, phrase them similarly.
Finally, it forces you to make a point worth emphasizing every single sentence. With the fat removed, the density of insight soars.
The length of your sentence
This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety.
Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a iilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals-sounds that say listen to this, it is important.
So write with a combination of short, medium, and long sentences. Create a sound that pleases the reader's ear. Don't just write words. Write music.
Writing Process
This process is mostly summarized from Julian’s Writing Well Handbook (read it! It’s great).
- Choose a topic
- Choose objective
- Example 1: Challange the status quo wrong
- Example 2: Everyone’s thinking but no one is saying
- Example 3: Key trends on a topic → predict the future
- Example 4: Research / Experimentation
- Example 5: Make a hard topic easy
- Example 6: Solution to a tough problem
- Example 7: Emotional story + take away lesson
- Write a messy braindump
- Talk vulnerably like you do with friends
- Explain what is needed to make your argument
- Explain the implications of your argument
- Write an intro
- Give context
- Explain the problem and what’s at stake
- Explain the problem's significance
- Add a Hook: Tease something fascinating (don’t fully reveal)
- Write those questions down: “If someone else wrote my intro, what questions would excite me to read this?”
- Rank your questions: How much intresting are they?
- The top questions become your hooks → Put into intro (don't reveal their answers)
- Sanity check your hooks (Ask others)
- You’ll share things they don’t already know → Tease your original insights in your introduction.
- You’ll not cover key points readers care about -> List the points you’ll cover.
- You’ll not deliver on hooks → Include quotes from authorities who agree with you.
- You're not qualified to write about this → share relevant credentials / be upfront about you being unqualified
How to generate hooks
If feedback-givers have skepticisms, proactively address them in your intro
- Get feedback on your intro
- Create a starting outline
- A captivating intro
- A section of intense surprise or insight
- An ending that satisfyingly justifies why the piece was worth reading.
- Rewrite for clarity, succinctness, and intrigue
- Cycle between rewriting, resting, and receiving feedback
- Copy edit for grammar, word choice, and flow
Tips
Keep short distance between subject and verb
Before: Joe quickly and unerringly picked the wrong word.
After: Joe always picked the wrong word.
Use strong verbs
Before: Joe walked down the street without direction.
After: Joe meandered west.
Avoid verb qualifiers
Namely: a bit, a little, sort of, kind of, rather, quite, very, too, pretty much
Before: Jack thought it was sort of a good idea.
After: Jack thought it was a good idea.
Passive verbs emphasize the receiver
Before: Omens loaded the night.
After: The night was loaded with omens.
Begin and end with strong words
Before: We drove into the Black smoke that crashed the whole car.
After: The black smoke we drove in crashed the whole car.
Use a period instead of a comma
Before: I’m not a liar, I just don’t respect the truth.
After: I’m not a liar. I just don’t respect the truth.
Use Active over Passive Voice
Before: The ball was thrown by Jerry.
After: Jerry throws the ball.
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